Tuesday, December 23, 2008
Pillow Talk
It was a long and frustrating day for both me and the hubby so we were cuddling in front of the T.V. attempting to wind down. He was pretty upset with his job and at times I wonder if he has a hard time remembering what we are going through this for, so I decided to remind him. I was going on and on about our dream to get a home in south Florida and he would have his Photography career and we would never have to suffer through another winter. He wasn't really feeling better and kept regressing back to all the day's trials. I told him he wasn't allowed to say another word unless it was about Florida. That worked. For the next half hour I had to listen about how his favorite football team - Miami Dolphins - made it to the playoffs. How romantic.
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You have wonderful comedic timing, use it in your writing!
ReplyDeleteBreaking up large paragraphs will help with flow and maximizing the "punch line".
Good stuff! Keep it up!